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grapegarden) wrote2007-04-30 04:42 pm
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0ld*Post: Kirby and Chuchu's Song
I've recently discovered my old fanfiction on my computer, after months and months of searching for it. Take note: I was 12-15 when I wrote these. XDDDD! Remember that one fic I mentioned, Kirby and Chuchu's Song, which I mentioned was the first and worst shipping fic I ever wrote? Well now, time to show you the reality of pain! :D Here we go!
Title: Kirby and Chuchu's Song (Originally Chuchu's Song)
Fandom: Kirby (Games)
Genre: Romance/Songfic
Rating: G
Warnings: SAP OVERLOAD. Crappy writing that would make even QoR cringe, and a songfic of Misty's Song from Pokémon. You read that right: Misty's Song.
Ships/Characters: Kirby/Chuchu. God, what drugs was I taking as a tween to make 'em so OOC? oO;;;;
Finished: Yes
Disclaimer- I get sick of writing disclaimers -_-... Anyway, I don't own any of the "Kirby" games in the world, and I also don't own "Misty's Song." which comes from "Pokemon".
Apology- I'm apologize to anyone who has read this story before, and ends up seeing a crappy Pokemon bashing story that I had deleted a long time ago. Below is what the fanfic is supposed to be like if that story hadn't gotten in the way. Enjoy...
**Kirby and Chuchu's Song**
By Serebii37
{Chuchu's POV}
I usually had been alone most of my life. As a child, I lived with my mother under the deep blue sea far from civilization. It all lasted until Dark Matter came along, possessed Acro, and separated us from each other. After awhile, I crashed onto the beach, covered with so many bruises and injuries that I couldn't even move. That was when I first met him... Kirby.
**Out here in the quiet of the night, beneath the stars... and moon...**
"Are you okay?" He reached out his hand for mine, slowly pulling me up. "You shouldn't be out lying in the shore late at night, you know. Let's walk back to my house, and heal your wounds." The next minute, we were at his home, and I eventually recovered. We had to move out though, for people possessed by Dark Matter surrounded us. It was then that we started our journey, and I met the rest of Kirby's friends.
Since that day, I had fallen helplessly in love with him. Not because he saved me, but his personality within. Kirby was always confident and caring, despite the fact that he could be a klutz sometimes. Whenever you look at his bright smile, it would often always bring you happiness too. Maybe he even likes me.
**We both know that we've got something on our mind
We won't admit... but it's true...**
Nah, who would love someone like me? Look at me; I'm a pink octopus in a red hair ribbon. I get angered easily, and I fight with everyone, which would lead us all in danger of another enemy. One day, I went too far. I driven into an argument with the others, while a giant Sir Kibble came along, and nearly beat us to death with his boomerang. Luckily, each of us managed to fight back, and defeat it. I looked with horror at everyone's condition. 'It's all my fault,' I thought. 'If only I didn't fight so much with the others...' I started to run off, with tears flowing down from my eyes. "Chuchu, wait!!!" Kirby cried as he ran after me, despite his condition. "Don't follow me!" I said coldly as I pushed Kirby to the ground, and went deep in the woods for my solitude.
**You look at me- I look away...**
***I wanna tell what I'm feeling, but I don't know how to start
I wanna tell you, but now I'm afraid that you might break my heart
Oh why should anything so easy ever be so hard to do?
I wanna tell you what I'm feeling and to say that-
I love you.***
{Kirby's POV}
It was 7 days since the incident, each of us was healed, and my friends and me continued our journey. Eventually, we reached the mountains, which were covered with clouds. "Is everyone ready?" I asked. "Ready!" "Ready." Chuchu mumbled. I could tell by the tone of her voice that she hadn't forgotten what happened last week. Chuchu probably still thought it was her fault about the attack. I tried to comfort her, but she would always push me away, and tell me to leave her alone. Chuchu, can't you see? I love you. I'd do anything to make you feel happy again, like the way you were before. Each night I gather words in my brain, trying to find and combine the ones that fit best, that would hopefully free you from pain and misery.
**I practice all the things that I could say- line by line, every word...**
You were often stubborn at times, but you always brought light to my world. Even I can sometimes give up, but you were always there for me. You seemed to have a very tough life, how happy you and your mother were when you met again. I want to tell how much I care for you, but what if you hate me? My heart would never be able to repair itself.
**I tell myself, today would be the day
but every time, I lose my nerve...**
'I have to tell her.' I thought. 'No matter how painful it is if she yells at me, it'll be better then keeping a secret.' That night, everyone was asleep except for Chuchu and I. Chuchu was looking high up at the sky from her sleeping bag. Her eyes showed no signs of rest within them. "Chuchu?" I asked. "What?" She replied in a disturbed tone of voice. "I wanted to tell you something-" "If it's about what happened last week, that it's not my fault and all, then SHUT UP!!!" She turned over with her back facing me.
**I look at you- You look away...**
***I wanna tell what I'm feeling, but I don't know how to start
I wanna tell you, but now I'm afraid that you might break my heart
Oh why should anything so easy ever be so hard to do?
I wanna tell you what I'm feeling and to say that-
I love you.***
{Normal POV}
**Why? Why do you turn away?
It must be you're afraid like me...**
"It's not that," Kirby explained. "It's something else." "What is it then?" Chuchu turned around again in order to face Kirby. "Chuchu..." Kirby cleared his throat, and began to speak. "I know that you probably think that I'm crazy, you can scream at much as much as you want, but throughout this journey, I always wanted to tell you this. I lo-" "What a minute!" Chuchu stood up, and covered Kirby's lip with one of her arms. "I know what you're gonna say."
**I've tried, but I can't pretend that I don't feel for you the way I do,
Can't you see?**
***I wanna tell you what I'm feeling, but I don't know how to start
I wanna tell you, but now I'm afraid that you might break my heart
Oh why should anything so easy ever be so hard to do?
I wanna tell you what I'm feeling and to say that-
I love you.***
***I wanna tell you what I'm feeling, but I don't know how to start
I wanna tell you, but now I'm afraid that you might break my heart
Oh why should anything so easy ever be so hard to do?
I wanna tell you what I'm feeling and to say that-
I love you...***
"No Chuchu," Kirby said frantically. "You've got it all wrong! It's not about wh-" "I know," Chuchu interrupted again. For the first time since 7 days, she smiled. "As I said earlier, I know what you're going to say. I've thought of you, just as much you thought of me. Now at last, our wishes have come true." "Chuchu..." Kirby smiled as the tears of joy streaked down his face. The two leaned forward, and their lips finally met.
*The End*
Natsume- Well, that was as cheesy.
Serebii37- I know! It was my first romance fic!!!
Raichu- Heh, thought so.
Serebii37- Anyways, please review! Feedback is always appreciated. ^_~
...DDDDDDDDD: *GAG*
First day of Puri's cruddy old fanfiction folks!
Title: Kirby and Chuchu's Song (Originally Chuchu's Song)
Fandom: Kirby (Games)
Genre: Romance/Songfic
Rating: G
Warnings: SAP OVERLOAD. Crappy writing that would make even QoR cringe, and a songfic of Misty's Song from Pokémon. You read that right: Misty's Song.
Ships/Characters: Kirby/Chuchu. God, what drugs was I taking as a tween to make 'em so OOC? oO;;;;
Finished: Yes
Disclaimer- I get sick of writing disclaimers -_-... Anyway, I don't own any of the "Kirby" games in the world, and I also don't own "Misty's Song." which comes from "Pokemon".
Apology- I'm apologize to anyone who has read this story before, and ends up seeing a crappy Pokemon bashing story that I had deleted a long time ago. Below is what the fanfic is supposed to be like if that story hadn't gotten in the way. Enjoy...
**Kirby and Chuchu's Song**
By Serebii37
{Chuchu's POV}
I usually had been alone most of my life. As a child, I lived with my mother under the deep blue sea far from civilization. It all lasted until Dark Matter came along, possessed Acro, and separated us from each other. After awhile, I crashed onto the beach, covered with so many bruises and injuries that I couldn't even move. That was when I first met him... Kirby.
**Out here in the quiet of the night, beneath the stars... and moon...**
"Are you okay?" He reached out his hand for mine, slowly pulling me up. "You shouldn't be out lying in the shore late at night, you know. Let's walk back to my house, and heal your wounds." The next minute, we were at his home, and I eventually recovered. We had to move out though, for people possessed by Dark Matter surrounded us. It was then that we started our journey, and I met the rest of Kirby's friends.
Since that day, I had fallen helplessly in love with him. Not because he saved me, but his personality within. Kirby was always confident and caring, despite the fact that he could be a klutz sometimes. Whenever you look at his bright smile, it would often always bring you happiness too. Maybe he even likes me.
**We both know that we've got something on our mind
We won't admit... but it's true...**
Nah, who would love someone like me? Look at me; I'm a pink octopus in a red hair ribbon. I get angered easily, and I fight with everyone, which would lead us all in danger of another enemy. One day, I went too far. I driven into an argument with the others, while a giant Sir Kibble came along, and nearly beat us to death with his boomerang. Luckily, each of us managed to fight back, and defeat it. I looked with horror at everyone's condition. 'It's all my fault,' I thought. 'If only I didn't fight so much with the others...' I started to run off, with tears flowing down from my eyes. "Chuchu, wait!!!" Kirby cried as he ran after me, despite his condition. "Don't follow me!" I said coldly as I pushed Kirby to the ground, and went deep in the woods for my solitude.
**You look at me- I look away...**
***I wanna tell what I'm feeling, but I don't know how to start
I wanna tell you, but now I'm afraid that you might break my heart
Oh why should anything so easy ever be so hard to do?
I wanna tell you what I'm feeling and to say that-
I love you.***
{Kirby's POV}
It was 7 days since the incident, each of us was healed, and my friends and me continued our journey. Eventually, we reached the mountains, which were covered with clouds. "Is everyone ready?" I asked. "Ready!" "Ready." Chuchu mumbled. I could tell by the tone of her voice that she hadn't forgotten what happened last week. Chuchu probably still thought it was her fault about the attack. I tried to comfort her, but she would always push me away, and tell me to leave her alone. Chuchu, can't you see? I love you. I'd do anything to make you feel happy again, like the way you were before. Each night I gather words in my brain, trying to find and combine the ones that fit best, that would hopefully free you from pain and misery.
**I practice all the things that I could say- line by line, every word...**
You were often stubborn at times, but you always brought light to my world. Even I can sometimes give up, but you were always there for me. You seemed to have a very tough life, how happy you and your mother were when you met again. I want to tell how much I care for you, but what if you hate me? My heart would never be able to repair itself.
**I tell myself, today would be the day
but every time, I lose my nerve...**
'I have to tell her.' I thought. 'No matter how painful it is if she yells at me, it'll be better then keeping a secret.' That night, everyone was asleep except for Chuchu and I. Chuchu was looking high up at the sky from her sleeping bag. Her eyes showed no signs of rest within them. "Chuchu?" I asked. "What?" She replied in a disturbed tone of voice. "I wanted to tell you something-" "If it's about what happened last week, that it's not my fault and all, then SHUT UP!!!" She turned over with her back facing me.
**I look at you- You look away...**
***I wanna tell what I'm feeling, but I don't know how to start
I wanna tell you, but now I'm afraid that you might break my heart
Oh why should anything so easy ever be so hard to do?
I wanna tell you what I'm feeling and to say that-
I love you.***
{Normal POV}
**Why? Why do you turn away?
It must be you're afraid like me...**
"It's not that," Kirby explained. "It's something else." "What is it then?" Chuchu turned around again in order to face Kirby. "Chuchu..." Kirby cleared his throat, and began to speak. "I know that you probably think that I'm crazy, you can scream at much as much as you want, but throughout this journey, I always wanted to tell you this. I lo-" "What a minute!" Chuchu stood up, and covered Kirby's lip with one of her arms. "I know what you're gonna say."
**I've tried, but I can't pretend that I don't feel for you the way I do,
Can't you see?**
***I wanna tell you what I'm feeling, but I don't know how to start
I wanna tell you, but now I'm afraid that you might break my heart
Oh why should anything so easy ever be so hard to do?
I wanna tell you what I'm feeling and to say that-
I love you.***
***I wanna tell you what I'm feeling, but I don't know how to start
I wanna tell you, but now I'm afraid that you might break my heart
Oh why should anything so easy ever be so hard to do?
I wanna tell you what I'm feeling and to say that-
I love you...***
"No Chuchu," Kirby said frantically. "You've got it all wrong! It's not about wh-" "I know," Chuchu interrupted again. For the first time since 7 days, she smiled. "As I said earlier, I know what you're going to say. I've thought of you, just as much you thought of me. Now at last, our wishes have come true." "Chuchu..." Kirby smiled as the tears of joy streaked down his face. The two leaned forward, and their lips finally met.
*The End*
Natsume- Well, that was as cheesy.
Serebii37- I know! It was my first romance fic!!!
Raichu- Heh, thought so.
Serebii37- Anyways, please review! Feedback is always appreciated. ^_~
...DDDDDDDDD: *GAG*
First day of Puri's cruddy old fanfiction folks!